The what of my topic is foster care and the problems that are created in children from it.
Possible titles: 1. Foster Care: The long run problems. 2. Foster Care: Helpful or hurtful?
3 topic sentences: 1. The foster care system is harmful in the long run. 2. Statistics show that foster care does more damage than it does good. 3. The children in foster care need more help than a roof over their heads for eighteen years, and then kicked out with no home or family.
I want my audience to see the damage that foster care does and think about the lives it affects. It would be great if some people took a stand and did something about the problem. Hopefully after my presentation more people will speak up about the overall negative effects of foster care and the system in place.